Evaluation..

Firstly we would like to say thank you to everyone who took their time out to write us comments! - Your thoughts are extremely important and we appreciate them :o) Ok, from reading all the comments, the following issues were raised and below each issue is what we plan to do about it..

IMPROVEMENTS

1) The lighting and sound was a concern
Where the lighting is concerned we've especially gone for the dark 'grimy' appearance because it adds suspense and mystery to the documentary. Its also important to ensure that the identity of our artists is kept concealed. However, lighting is only like this for the filming done at night. Most of the documentary will be in normal lighting.

The sound isn't going to be necessary when we show the illegal graffiti being done at night. All the other scenes feature clear sound.

2) Sneak Peaks
Most of you wanted to see clips of our footage and we shall be posting it up as soon as we return to school!

3) Some of you recommend interviews with artists...
Well I'm pleased to say that we've already got footage for both illegal and legal artists that we can use..

4) Montage opening sequence (Illegal vs Legal)
Well, we've got something extremely similar to this planned, but with this idea Rav (who's taken the initiative to sort out the opening of the documentary) will be posting up soon.

5) Music!
Many of you gave us lots of ideas on the type of music to use and we're glad to say that your ideas match ours - we are aiming to have sections of rap music whilst at other times possibly having tracks that our target audience listen to so that it appeals to them too.

6) Featuring Ramone as a character in our documentary
Well this was our initial idea but Ramone pointed out that its better to focus on a group of writers who will tell the story through their eyes - this means we also get more than one strong viewpoint.

THE GOOD BITS...!

Everyone said our blog is very detailed and liked our progress reports. And then the list goes on...! (hehe!)

The Group